an american aquarium-drinker. (poeticpathetic) wrote in deadly_syntax,
an american aquarium-drinker.

Okay.. soooo...

I'm well aware that only Ethan has posted his submission for last week's challenge. But, at his request, here's this week's.

I was driving south of Melrose when I happened upon my lover's old house.
I found myself staring at the closed up door like the day she threw me out.
Diana, Diana, Diana, I would die for you.
I'm in love with you completely, I'm afraid that's all I can do.
She said "You can sleep upon my doorstep, you can promise me indifference, Jim.
But my mind's made up and I'll never let you in again."

This week's story has to be about why one lover won't take the other back. You can use Jim and Diana and create a fabricated background, or you can use original characters, it makes no difference.

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